wild bonsai
What do you think of my writing (I’m 15)?
Tumbling out of bed with her ribbons in her birds nest hair and strawberry lipstick smudged from cheek to breast. Sunlight poured through the cotton veil that dressed her windows. Factories and apartments hidden behind goodwill interior. Coffee and cigarette hung in the air. Snooze was on the couch in an open kimono tap, tap, tapping his foot against the wood tiling and snapping his fingers to the spinning record. Booming drums and smooth saxophones spewing from the speakers. Her eyes rang up from his cherry feet to his bonsai cut like an elevator machine. Their eyes met and that smile escaped its cage. Something had to be done and like wild animals in a social life city at dawn they tore at each other. Pouncing and ripping their second coat off. Paint exploring the walls with each button undone. Stars falling from the ceiling and confetti shooting out of every pore. Nirvana held the two children to her breast and they danced in their amphetamine ecstasy.
It’s good I like it 
Just need to fix some punctuation, but other than that you’re really good.
Try this website www.gaiaonline.com it’s fun, and you can practice writing.
Emile Hirsch – Into The Wild, Speed Racer, Milk
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Bonsai From the Wild: Collecting, Styling & Caring for Bonsai – Completely Revised & Expanded 2nd Edition $29.95 Coming this summer! Reserve yours now! The bonsai classic youve been waiting for! Order now to receive yours as soon as they come in! Nick Lenzs classic, one of a kind book is back in print. Completely revised, expanded and redesigned – with 90 more pages and numerous new color photos. Nick expounds in his unique style about bonsai care, styling and aesthetics – with extra attention paid to coll… |
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